Josie Whitehead’s Poems

                 

                 

                 

                I'm trying to use rhyming words of sound to paint this picture in a fun way.  The poem starts off softly.  Imagine, if you can, a woman, perhaps sewing by candlelight.  The first sign of a change in the weather is the draught down the chimney which causes the candle to flicker or flutter, while mother mutters:  "There may be rain soon."  As I go through the poem, still using the rhyming pattern, I am trying to show how the storm builds up, waking everyone except father, who, just like a man, can sleep through anything. zzzzz 

                 

                 

                SLEEPING THROUGH THE STORM

                 

                By Josie Whitehead

    Josie at home 3

                 

                 

     

     

     

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                The candle flutters; mother mutters;

                Rain then patters; raindrops scatter

                Thunder rumbles; raindrops tumble.

                Chimneys shake; the baby wakes

                 

                The wild wind shrieks; gutters creak

                The baby howls; the old dog growls;

                Thunder clashes; lightning flashes,

                Rain then pours -

                      While - - - father snores.

                 

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